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[Olga]

.... или краткость - сестра таланта


Изобразите ситуацию, в которой вы недавно оказались, или которую вам пришлось наблюдать со стороны. Это может быть любая даже самая абсурдная ситуация.

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[Olga]

Начнемс?

This morning I saw a big and fat snail hurrying up to his home along the race track of the stadium

[Olga]

Write a little every day – just a little scrap… Don’t write what you do… It is the reasons, not the things, that matter. Let your little daily scrap be something you’ve thought…. What you think is yourself; you write it down and there it is, a tiny bit of you….. you yourself. The real you.

A.S.m. Hutchinson

[Марина]

Some days ago my boss snaped at me (unfairly ), because he was nervous, and we fell out with him.(может здесь надо Perfect?)
He said, he would give me the sack after my vacation (in 3 weeks).

Now he behaves as usially, even more friendly. Talks about his life and etc. I think he is ashamed. But he doesn't say I am sacked (is it correct?) or not. So I am waiting for my vacation.

[Olga]

To Marina
Fell out in Past simple is OK. In the beginnign of the sentence you said "some days ago" and that's the main reason.

He behaves as usual - just remember that we say
We do something usually but AS usual./ Is it clear?

The rest is OK.

Marina, what is your job?

[Olga]

To Marina
Fell out in Past simple is OK. In the beginnign of the sentence you said "some days ago" and that's the main reason.

He behaves as usual - just remember that we say
We do something usually but AS usual. Is it clear?

The rest is OK.

Marina, what is your job?

[Марина]

I'm a secretary. I don't like this job, because it is unsuited for my character. I wanted to work untill a maternity leave because my salary is good. But I will not be distressed if my boss sack me in actual fact.

[Olga]

Please pay atention to the following:

doesn't suit my character

Вместо "in actual fact" you should say In fact OR Actually and place it in the beginning of the sentence

And what kind od company are you working for?

[Марина]

This is a big and rich company. It's owner is олигарх He is one of a hundred of "the richest persons of Russia" (The Forbes magazine). And my boss is a top-manager in this company.

[Olga]

I see. So you have a serious job